tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565157852341701054.comments2018-01-20T09:21:32.187+00:00Poetry in MotionElizabeth Curriehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05941466808378064593noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565157852341701054.post-6317599470261292622011-06-23T13:08:20.725+01:002011-06-23T13:08:20.725+01:00Jane Lovering (http://www.janelovering.co.uk/) sai...Jane Lovering (http://www.janelovering.co.uk/) said... <br />"I can almost taste the pina coladas! Excellent poetry, Liz, rather bitter-sweet (and a lovely picture to illustrate, too)." <br /><br />Comment to original post at Tony Riches 'The Writing Desk' (http://www.tonyriches.co.uk/) on 9 May 2011 at 18:23Elizabeth Curriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05941466808378064593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565157852341701054.post-5676518693020681372011-05-17T06:58:30.772+01:002011-05-17T06:58:30.772+01:00I love thisI love thistonyricheshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18169101546380473710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565157852341701054.post-51821418490804262352011-04-28T15:56:14.869+01:002011-04-28T15:56:14.869+01:00Oh, I love this one Elizabeth. It reads beautifull...Oh, I love this one Elizabeth. It reads beautifully and is very enigmatic. It says a lot to me and no doubt something slightly different with others. Do you know what though? I prefer it without the last two lines - but that's just personal 'cause I really love it with the last line being 'It's Knowing!' Although I have studied poetry, I'm not "deeply" into it, but I know what I like. I've had a quick look round the rest of the site too - artistic as ever - and the poetry demands more of my time. I'll be back!Deb Rickardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17941866708845848582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565157852341701054.post-6516178911882274082011-04-28T15:10:20.993+01:002011-04-28T15:10:20.993+01:00Thanks for your comments Jess. And for pointing ou...Thanks for your comments Jess. And for pointing out the omission. I had spotted that earlier & thought I'd corrected it; but no! Typo, in a text near you now!Elizabeth Curriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05941466808378064593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565157852341701054.post-84913546640424229512011-04-28T10:21:11.343+01:002011-04-28T10:21:11.343+01:00Oh and I have this picture of the Catseye nebula t...Oh and I have this picture of the Catseye nebula too. xJessica https://www.blogger.com/profile/01252997206419782373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565157852341701054.post-19189557350885710692011-04-28T10:20:28.418+01:002011-04-28T10:20:28.418+01:00Again this is beautiful but its the metre that is ...Again this is beautiful but its the metre that is so good! I was trying to write poetry agian last night and I thought I don't have the same intuitive use of rhythm like you - maybe Horses of the Night had it but its a real skill of yours.<br /><br />I think you might have missed out of 'we' in the 1st line of the 2nd verse, though. xJessica https://www.blogger.com/profile/01252997206419782373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565157852341701054.post-88670807566629578132011-04-25T14:16:48.200+01:002011-04-25T14:16:48.200+01:00Thanks Jane! I was trying to write this during tha...Thanks Jane! I was trying to write this during that anarchic limerick exchange on Twitter last evening! Was really hard to 'sustain the mood' amidst such levity (or do I mean profanity?)!Elizabeth Curriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05941466808378064593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565157852341701054.post-68250991366503465982011-04-25T14:07:26.683+01:002011-04-25T14:07:26.683+01:00Nice. Very evocative and slightly erotic at the s...Nice. Very evocative and slightly erotic at the same time.Jane Loveringhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15393411255730345765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565157852341701054.post-51800147858905205632011-04-20T14:15:04.806+01:002011-04-20T14:15:04.806+01:00Mr Cheesey Rhyme - the poet's curse (think he ...Mr Cheesey Rhyme - the poet's curse (think he might get in on the act with most of us at some time or another)!Elizabeth Curriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05941466808378064593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565157852341701054.post-47098392919090534572011-04-20T10:22:16.194+01:002011-04-20T10:22:16.194+01:00It's so good hearing all these again. This is ...It's so good hearing all these again. This is so well timed and there is no hint of Mr Cheesy Rhyme!Jessica https://www.blogger.com/profile/01252997206419782373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565157852341701054.post-78836032537269933522011-04-20T10:18:08.575+01:002011-04-20T10:18:08.575+01:00So beautiful! I love this one. And wonderful for p...So beautiful! I love this one. And wonderful for practising sightreading like Shakespeare.Jessica https://www.blogger.com/profile/01252997206419782373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565157852341701054.post-56877571341119496832011-04-19T17:29:15.611+01:002011-04-19T17:29:15.611+01:00Much appreciated Poetryman, thank you. Not all my ...Much appreciated Poetryman, thank you. Not all my poetry is about the 'beautiful'; it's also an expression/critique of the darker aspects of life!Elizabeth Curriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05941466808378064593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565157852341701054.post-27939879950386203432011-04-18T18:58:24.658+01:002011-04-18T18:58:24.658+01:00Terrific, very well thought out and put to paperTerrific, very well thought out and put to paperMike Sutcliffehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17306691004504818181noreply@blogger.com