tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565157852341701054.post7606830748467227295..comments2018-01-20T09:21:32.187+00:00Comments on Poetry in Motion: Secret FireElizabeth Curriehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05941466808378064593noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565157852341701054.post-51821418490804262352011-04-28T15:56:14.869+01:002011-04-28T15:56:14.869+01:00Oh, I love this one Elizabeth. It reads beautifull...Oh, I love this one Elizabeth. It reads beautifully and is very enigmatic. It says a lot to me and no doubt something slightly different with others. Do you know what though? I prefer it without the last two lines - but that's just personal 'cause I really love it with the last line being 'It's Knowing!' Although I have studied poetry, I'm not "deeply" into it, but I know what I like. I've had a quick look round the rest of the site too - artistic as ever - and the poetry demands more of my time. I'll be back!Deb Rickardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17941866708845848582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565157852341701054.post-6516178911882274082011-04-28T15:10:20.993+01:002011-04-28T15:10:20.993+01:00Thanks for your comments Jess. And for pointing ou...Thanks for your comments Jess. And for pointing out the omission. I had spotted that earlier & thought I'd corrected it; but no! Typo, in a text near you now!Elizabeth Curriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05941466808378064593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565157852341701054.post-84913546640424229512011-04-28T10:21:11.343+01:002011-04-28T10:21:11.343+01:00Oh and I have this picture of the Catseye nebula t...Oh and I have this picture of the Catseye nebula too. xJessica https://www.blogger.com/profile/01252997206419782373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565157852341701054.post-19189557350885710692011-04-28T10:20:28.418+01:002011-04-28T10:20:28.418+01:00Again this is beautiful but its the metre that is ...Again this is beautiful but its the metre that is so good! I was trying to write poetry agian last night and I thought I don't have the same intuitive use of rhythm like you - maybe Horses of the Night had it but its a real skill of yours.<br /><br />I think you might have missed out of 'we' in the 1st line of the 2nd verse, though. xJessica https://www.blogger.com/profile/01252997206419782373noreply@blogger.com